You will never know
how much I care
or that when you speak
I breath your air
You will never know
how happy I am
when you are near
or that your laughter
melts my tears
You will never know
that I don’t want to love you
it is a choice I didn’t make
my heart belongs to you
and is here for you to take.
Oh, how I love you…
You will never know.
(c) Nicole Luongo
3/18/03.
Mar 14, 2012 @ 12:42:20
That is beautiful, I really like it a lot! Thank you for sharing with us!
Mar 14, 2012 @ 13:06:06
You’re welcome, Stacy. Thank you for reading my poem and sharing your feedback.
Mar 14, 2012 @ 13:24:54
Nicole!
Wanted to share the fact that you are one of my sunshine blogger award winners as well. After I had a chance to read your on here, as well as read about you, I have become a fan.
Thank you!
http://theartinthepen.wordpress.com/2012/03/14/my-sunshine-blogger-award-winners-18/
Mar 14, 2012 @ 13:39:50
Hi Kymmie!
Wow, thank you for awarding me with my second Sunshine Blogger Award! How very nice of you!! Thanks for reading my blog…so neat to know I have a mutual fan, as I am one of yours.
Mar 14, 2012 @ 18:36:21
Love this Nicole – It just sticks out to me and reminds me of someone and a time in my life. Great job!
Mar 14, 2012 @ 18:54:29
Thank you! I am glad this poem brings back memories for you.
Mar 15, 2012 @ 00:44:19
Great post, Nicole! You have done a great job of exploring the deep, burning desire of true love!
Mar 15, 2012 @ 02:40:26
Hi Steve,
Thanks for visiting my blog! I enjoy writing about love; so glad you liked this one.
May 09, 2012 @ 10:04:59
Ok. Here was my last comment:
I really like the line “and when you speak I breathe your air”. I really like how this poem flows. Do you just spit these out or do you really have to think about them?
May 09, 2012 @ 22:16:31
Thank you. I just write what I feel at the moment. I don’t think about it much…I get an inspiration and the words just flow! You should try writing poetry again…why did you stop?
May 09, 2012 @ 22:29:01
Mmm…I suppose because I would write about what made me sad. Now I’m not sad.
May 09, 2012 @ 22:30:24
I understand – makes sense. You could try writing about what makes you happy!