Game Over

I’ve played your game
and now I’m done
for it is a game
I could never have won

I wanted you to care
I wished you would share
I should have known better
games aren’t always fair

The more I played
the more I learned
love and trust
must be earned
for if it is not
you will always
get burned

I’ve played your game
and now I’m done
but don’t ever think
that means you won.
(c) Nicole Luongo

A poem from Naked Desires: a poetic diary straight from the heart.

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10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. ClownPonders
    May 03, 2012 @ 10:33:34

    There was an awesome flow to this poem! The last stanza blew me away, nice work!

    Reply

  2. Brandon Falco
    Aug 03, 2012 @ 02:31:16

    Woah Nicole this is great! I think this one is my favorite so far! Keep up the great writing because you can connect with so many people through poetry!

    -Brandon

    Reply

  3. RoSy
    Aug 03, 2012 @ 15:13:06

    I say – You win!

    Reply

  4. Alicia
    Aug 21, 2012 @ 13:56:36

    I really like this one. It shows how strong you are.

    Reply

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