In the corners of your mind
the space between love and loss
think back to a time gone by
when love remained
at the end of the day
passion melted our troubles away
In the memories left behind
in the corners of your mind
where past loves reside…
remember me.
(c) Nicole Luongo
7/24/12.
Jul 24, 2012 @ 20:41:19
I like it.
Jul 24, 2012 @ 21:22:04
Thanks!
Jul 25, 2012 @ 10:54:29
Powerful and well written, Nicole. Love is always a powerful force to reckon with.
Jul 25, 2012 @ 15:03:38
Thank you! Yes, love is very powerful.
Aug 01, 2012 @ 11:00:54
I loved it Nicole thanks for sharing it with us. Poetry is amazing
We have a few Poetry members over on blog engage now it’s exciting.
Aug 01, 2012 @ 11:14:06
Hi Brian,
You’re welcome! Thanks for reading my poem. How exciting that you have more poetry members on Blog Engage!
Aug 03, 2012 @ 09:11:49
lovely Nicole…resonated with me on a personal level
Aug 03, 2012 @ 10:37:50
Hi Danielle,
Thanks! It’s so nice to know that Remember Me resonated with you on a personal level. I wanted to write about my Mom and Alzheimer’s, but turned it into a love poem instead.
Aug 03, 2012 @ 15:02:23
Love it!
Glad we met. Your blog background is like the one I picked too…It’s like we were meant to meet – LOL
Aug 03, 2012 @ 15:07:21
Thank you for visiting & following my blog! I’m glad we met, too. Funny you mentioned our similar blog background – I noticed it when I visited your blog!
Aug 04, 2012 @ 12:09:03
liked it
Aug 04, 2012 @ 12:10:19
Thank you!
Oct 01, 2012 @ 09:17:01
Remember Me… is so beautiful. As I read it it had full meaning to me and mine… thanks
Oct 01, 2012 @ 10:02:19
You’re welcome. Thank you for commenting on my poem and following my blog.