Remember Me

In the corners of your mind
the space between love and loss
think back to a time gone by
when love remained
at the end of the day
passion melted our troubles away

In the memories left behind
in the corners of your mind
where past loves reside…
remember me.
(c) Nicole Luongo
7/24/12.

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14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Alicia
    Jul 24, 2012 @ 20:41:19

    I like it. :)

    Reply

  2. readinpleasure
    Jul 25, 2012 @ 10:54:29

    Powerful and well written, Nicole. Love is always a powerful force to reckon with.

    Reply

  3. bbrian017
    Aug 01, 2012 @ 11:00:54

    I loved it Nicole thanks for sharing it with us. Poetry is amazing :) We have a few Poetry members over on blog engage now it’s exciting.

    Reply

  4. Danielle Walker
    Aug 03, 2012 @ 09:11:49

    lovely Nicole…resonated with me on a personal level

    Reply

    • bareyournaketruth
      Aug 03, 2012 @ 10:37:50

      Hi Danielle,

      Thanks! It’s so nice to know that Remember Me resonated with you on a personal level. I wanted to write about my Mom and Alzheimer’s, but turned it into a love poem instead.

      Reply

  5. RoSy
    Aug 03, 2012 @ 15:02:23

    Love it!
    Glad we met. Your blog background is like the one I picked too…It’s like we were meant to meet – LOL

    Reply

  6. Aparna Pathak
    Aug 04, 2012 @ 12:09:03

    liked it

    Reply

  7. flanana1
    Oct 01, 2012 @ 09:17:01

    Remember Me… is so beautiful. As I read it it had full meaning to me and mine… thanks

    Reply

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